Some variation of your love sticks
To my skin where we last parted
Tailing lines in skies
Not waiting anymore.
Continuous vibrations act as a simpler
Form of blood that pulsates through
Every momentum, not torn, not hurt
Only separation
Will not win.
I asked the wind to carry my whispers to your ear
Across the ocean, across the universe
To press into your heart this obvious
Feeling I possess, you are aware of
It, you are ready for it,
You Are. It.
Legs dangle off the shoreline as I deemed
Forever certainly wasn't long enough
Some people with round faces are just
Meant to touch noses are just
Supposed to melt into one another
To stay that way, intertwined
Underwater, breath
Gives way to
Your heart;;
I am in.
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I am in love and it's so gorgeous and tangled, but not in a knotty kind of way, in a woven kind of way.
Something's going to change my world.
P.S. The Beatles were genius.
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"your love sticks
To my skin where we last parted
Tailing lines in skies"
"Some people with round faces are just
Meant to touch noses are just
Supposed to melt into one another
To stay that way, intertwined"
aww
love this
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-excessive capitalization (unless it's your style. i, for one, dislike it)
-Your heart;;
remove one semi colon.
this was beautiful. i hope i'll fall in love someday. this really was beautiful.
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This is so sweet. Its so dreamy and true, the love in your hands in your heart in your entire body just radiating. I know that feelings. When you walk down the street you just want to press your hands into the sun and send your kisses and feel their body with yours. You just want to feel so wrapped up in them.
This is so gorgeous and meaningful your attatchment and thoughts and heart just shine in this. I loved the line,
"Legs dangle off the shoreline.."
Those words looked fab together and i just like all those words and the image and the serenity. The entire last bit was so lovely, how each line flowed into the next, soft images blinking and just so sweet. Just cute, just real, just love. love!!
xoxoawesome
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