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[ Senses only fade ]

Senses only fade
To return with a breathtaking blow.
Will you sharpen the blade
With another imperfect kiss?

You tremble at his touch.
You're swept off your feet by his radiance
Caution is erased and replaced.
You leave it all behind.

The beginning of life is lost.
This aged and perfected love is forsaken.
And this is you, betrayed.

Fuck forever.
You're stuck in the here and now
And
It won't be ok, not tonight
Despite what anyone may say.

You never ever wanted this.
Who could ever ask for this?

The bottle lies empty in the sink.
The smell of vomit lingers on your breath.
Will he cry for you when you are gone?

This is how it feels to slowly waste away...

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  • MissStranger
    January 8, 2008

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    hey...you're back in town! weeeell done indeed!I see the inspiration struck you!do please don't stop cause your work makes someone out-there happy!