I'm sorry about that one time we never did anything wrong
I'm sorry about writing that one suicidal song
I'm sorry about never telling you a lie...
If I should live or die.... you decide
I'm sorry for giving you everything in my heart
I'm sorry for loving you, realizing you'd hurt me.
I'm sorry for giving you everything I wanted to be.
A contest entry
- Apologies by Paulies Cracker.
550 points, ended January 21, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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oh my gosh... this was amazing.. i cried when i read this..... it was wonderful..... i wish you the best of luck.. keep up the great work...
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The feelings in this are not just remorseful but elaborate enough to show caring!
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