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Peculiar

Before I was diagnosed
‘peculiar’ he said to me
“always be yourself…”

Amazed by his lack of
precaution; I almost
believed him.

I almost let go of my tongue;
almost opened my eyes,
So nearly, I noticed him
rubbing his hands together
hovering by a button that said

‘insanity.’

But, it was too late.

I knew he’d sounded
the alarm when they brutally
stitched my mouth and
extracted my pupils.

Then, I felt the ink forced
against my head.

“Peculiar.”

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  • enitsirhC
    July 2, 2008
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    Thanks for entering my contest!


  • januaryrain gold member
    March 5, 2008
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    This is wonderful, I really loved it, so much so that I read it three times.