we are trapped in secretiveness
like a little mouse running to hide
for it is a supprise because there the best of friends
so exited to spill the beans
there are a whole bunch of teens
in a little room ready to scream
Because it is her birthday and she is no longer a adolescent
Author notes
random just made it up doesn't really resemble anything but it could if you were going to plan a suprise party
A contest entry
- Silence by insearchofsweetness.
875 points, ended January 7, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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This starts out nicely. I like the metaphor in the first two lines. I also liked the aspect of silence that you picked. . .the one that comes right before a suprise. Thanks for the poem!
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