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Misled

I'm not ok!
The light no longer shines
The light that used to save me
The light that used used to guide me home
and now, depend on you I can no more.

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  • Daizy21
    January 6, 2008

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    Three lights!I see it, this is a very sad but strong poem...I like it alot!thank you for entering and good luck!