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A Moment Of Me



Sky clears after days of rain
all that remains
is a solitary whisp of cloud...

...playing catch up.


A contest entry

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  • Keyser Soze
    January 18, 2008

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    I don't know why she put 'supposedly' in her comment, you did fantastic. A very profound, brief moment I think anyone can relate to. Well done.
    Thank you so much for your entry, I really enjoyed it.


  • Metaphorist
    January 11, 2008

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    This is (supposedly) the closest to being what we were looking for in the contest. A succinct poem, but quite thought-provoking.

    Good luck.