visiting graveyards...
an invisible snowflake
kisses my forehead
A contest entry
- Haiku Contest by misticmoonlite.
300 points, ended January 6, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is very evocative - a ghostly kiss in a graveyard! The haiku form is very lovely, I enjoyed considering it.
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This haiku holds tremendous imagery.
You have created a feeling of aloneness
and quiet, and I love that last line:
"kisses my forehead".
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Thank you very much for your time and wonderful comments!
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This is such a beautiful haiku.... sigh. Your syllables are correct (congrats). I really like how it is so simple, but makes you think. Keep writing!
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Thank you very much! I'm not for syllable counting in haiku writing though this one just wrote itself.
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sigh
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Beautiful auntie - simply pointing out that the snowflake is invisible creates such a vivid image
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Unusual, yes. But very interesting! I like the forshadowing and the imagery. Good luck in the contest!
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Unusual Haiku, dark but yet effective,thank you for this entry,good luck..mm
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