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A Mariner's Tale

Hear the mariner's tale of maidens fair.

Of beauties who live in the oceans deep.

Visions of damsels with shimmering hair.

Mysterious ladies, the secret the sea does keep.

 

 

Mere glimpses so fleeting, then disappear.

An elegant flip of a fanned finned fish tail.

Mermaid, sweet sea princess were you here?

Or hallucinations brought on by strong ale.

 

 

These magical mermaids, then start to sing.

Tempting the sailor with promises of lust.

Mermaids, the wicked sirens, their voices do ring.

Leading the ships to disaster, an end so unjust.

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  • The Poetic Angel
    January 19, 2008
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    congrats on the Silver Jems M'Lady well deserved

    xxx Your cheeky lil angel xxx


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    January 19, 2008

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    What a beautiful background. This is a great tale on the mermaid. Best of luck in the contest.


    whisper


  • And Hyetal
    January 19, 2008

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    Wow! I love your tale of the mermaids. The image and the background were perfect for it, too! This was a beautiful poem about the mermaids, and thank you for entering!

    Always,
    Cassie


    • Corvus Corone
      January 19, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment and the opportunity to write about mermaids

      Jem

  • The Poetic Angel
    January 7, 2008

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    butiful Jems Ma'am

    love the background ... good luck in the contest

    xxx Your cheeky lil angel xxx

    xxxxxxxx xxxxxx

    • Corvus Corone
      January 19, 2008
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      One of many mermaid bkgs I'll make as I have some awesome mermaid pics. Just need the words to write with them now

      Thank you My angel

      xxx Jem xxx


  • Erika Elektrikka
    January 6, 2008

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    This is wonderful I love the eloquence of your writing.

    Good luck in the contest

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