fragments of my mind
splitting
precariously-
shards of knowledge
break away
into an unknown fantasy
layer upon layer
slowly dissolve
crying in misery
sanity escapes
releasing a new braveity
leaving my mind
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A contest entry
- #6 OPTIONS CONTEST (: by Walk-Free.
700 points, ended January 6, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Oh my. This is quite a description of loosing it. I've been on that edge before...looking down in. I didn't like what I saw so I ran back to sanity. lol
Thanks for entering!
Paul -
I relly loved this piece. I love the word choice and the style at the end. Thank youfor entering and good luck in my contest.
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Brillant ^^ A bit short but I loved the end
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Oh wow You are getting better and better Congratulations on the Bronze trophy
RedwingSpirit
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WOW
I totally love the use of words here..
And it's really cool how you ended with that form!
Thanks and good luck!
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