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Touch down

Soaring higher
where priorities wrestle with freedom,
the daily struggle takes flight, footloose
where significance... insignificance battle.
through smiling blue sky's and cotton candy clouds,
air crushing panic of white knuckle turbulence
forgotten as you glide to the ground.
Achievement... relief,
touch down

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  • astrum
    January 10, 2008
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    Fab

    I love the rhyme in your piece, so unforced and natural!


  • islekine gold member
    January 6, 2008

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    I love this!

    I am a white knuckle flyer...
    You hit home with me on this one!
    Well penned...write on!
    Happy New Year!
    Think: *PEACE*