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Welcome Jesse

Welcome Jesse to the world
as around mother's hands your fingers curl
we've waited nine months for this day
a prayer of thanks to God we pray.

To our family you're a special part
such love you bring into our hearts
your tiny fingers, hands and toes
set our faces all aglow.

You are such a precious son to us
of you we'll always make a fuss
be proud of you in all you do
and help you see life's wondrous views.

We'll take your hand and hold on tight
take you where the sun shines bright
you sure deserve the very best
within our hearts you'll always rest.







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  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    January 23, 2008

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    Thank you so much for participating in this one, Gaylene. The poem is really beautiful, and will always be special to me. Ah, yes, how can you not always make a fuss over one so small and wonderful. I loved that part of your poem. It really means so much to me to have this poem. Thank you.


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    January 14, 2008

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    beautiful work, rich and lyrical and just endearing. Love it hun and thanks so much for writing this wonderful piece, Jesse and his Mom will love it. Hugs, Bunny


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    January 7, 2008

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    This will be a wonderful addition to Jesse's baby book. You have a gift for lyrical expression, and this tender poem does not force its rhyme. Good luck in this contest. Peace, Liz


  • arafura gold member
    January 6, 2008
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    within our hearts...

    Very sweet and tender... I'm sure Cupcrazy will love it! Well done and good luck in the contest!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 6, 2008

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    awwwwwwwwwww this is such a beautifuly write and hols just thos etender and gentle words. well done gran and best of luck


  • shuvi
    January 6, 2008

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    This is such a delight.. awwwwwwwwwwwwww Writing to bring happiness to others as always, my super-granma!
    Love and cheers, shuvi

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