Oh God
time and again I pretended that
I campaigned this and I worked that
all the time, all the performs of mine
causes me high-and-mighty
influencing me to the land of triumphs
however,I never pondered that
when I wish to perform
then who is behind me imparting the verdicts?
who is persisting in the cerebrate of mine
while knocking me to proceed?
it is you only inhabiting in my envision
transiting me according to your forethought
and I am only the ancillary
to make your hopes triumphed
Oh God...
Author notes
Prompt..a quote...
Without change, something sleeps inside us, and seldom awakens. The sleeper must awaken.-Frank Herbert
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired- By Soulful Woman by Soulful Woman.
1000 points, ended January 20, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh, wonderful wrecking bar,
to be wielded by such
a great hand
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I really liked the style of this poem, your word choices were somewhat unsual but really added to the surreal feeling. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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good work my man
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I may ponder upon the many ways life flows in the sea...or sit idle upon the depths of the ocean...waiting winds of destiny to take my vessel to destined shores...where upon my sails...I whisper...Oh God~
Love the write
Mal
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This one is inspired...truly inspired..."Oh God, you are my thought and my inspiration and the worker of all my accomplishments...I am only the vehicle of your choosing"...my own interpretation of your words...Best of luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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Good luck in the contest. Oh God seems to be the main two words I contunilly speak lately.
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God celebrates his work by endowing us with inspirations and hope, for if we are not to marvel at his work, who is?????
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A very in depth, interesting take on this pic. Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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