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Every Day Is New

Missing image
As sunrise bursts on the horizon
in flashing golden hues
I know this artist has splashed His paint
for all the world to view.

From dark of night the earth transforms
as the sky becomes ablaze
and brilliance dances overhead
and with the clouds it plays.

As I gaze in awe and wonder
I never cease to be amazed,
for each new day is filled with hope
in many different ways.

The beauty of the sky above
is so different every day
as hands of radiant glory
are showing us the way.

Beneath the light of each new day
watch new colours spark our hearts
walk together hand in hand
and of mankind become a true part.






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  • AShotInTheDark
    January 9, 2008

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    I'm intrigued how you interpreted the image as a sunrise while others (like myself) viewed it as a sunset. this is beautiful.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    January 6, 2008
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    every day break is a wonder isn't it .. you glory in it here thanks so muckh xx peter


  • ramonesgirlxoxo
    January 6, 2008
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    Great imagery and good use of rhyme and flow! Good luck!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 6, 2008

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    this is such a beautiful write gran and i love the imagery thats painted within it. well done and best of luck

  • A floatingleaf silver member
    January 6, 2008

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    Beautiful...the line...I know this artist has splashed His paint...captures the feelings in this painting...well done...


    sunny


  • maralisa silver member
    January 6, 2008
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    beautiful write


  • arafura gold member
    January 6, 2008

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    lovely...!

    Beautiful take on the prompt poet! Your lovely poem fits the image perfectly. Great flow to this and it reads so easily. Good luck in the contest!

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