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Antenatal Abdication

Born accursed to the Abbatoir,
Drowning in hopeless abandon,
Abased and Abstruse he lay...

An Aberration or creation,
An abeyance oy empathy,
Acceded and Abstruse she lay...

Abnegated to the Anathema,
Alienate the Provocater,
Amorphous and Abstruse it lay...

Ablution's too late...
It waited past the fall of the axe,
Anaesthete and Abstruse they lay...

Universally declared an alarmist,
For seeing the Ad Nauseum cruelty,
Ostracised and Abstruse they grow...

An Aftermath Predicted for he,
Yet to face the Acerbic realities,
Abstruse and confused they've Grown...

Abstruse and vengeful they're known,
For they are already Forsaken,
As they make their way into their world...

Yet they're More Human Than Human...

A contest entry

amateur writer here...comments would be really appreciated...

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  • DragonBlue gold member
    January 21, 2008

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    Arbitrations will last an eternity trying to decipher what you mean. Thank you for entering my contest.

    Blessed Be~
    )O(
    DragonBlue


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 6, 2008

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    I thank you very much for this wonderful write but I will have to remove it due to age limit. I have a contest if you have a gold winning poems you can enter just go to my home page to find the link Sorry