I thought we'd never make it,
But here we are,
Together forever,
Just you and me.
Lying beneath the stars,
Waiting for the sun to rise,
I know it'll last forever,
Because you hold me so tight.
And with me in your arms boy
I'm as high as the clouds,
Flying over heaven,
Nothing can stop us now...
Author notes
"Earthquake! Duck!"
A contest entry
- Flying.... by islekine.
600 points, ended January 15, 2008, 17 entries
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Great write!
Nicely penned indeed. The flow in the poem is quite nice. The ryhme is also nice. Thank you for entering my contest, and thank you very much for following the rule and puttting "Earthquake! Duck!" in your author's notes! It's greatly appreciated! -
Nicely penned!
Thanks for entering!
Write on!
Think: *PEACE*
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This is such a lovely poem. You have written this so beautifully and I could almost feel I was floating as I was reading. Best of luck for the contest.
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