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So Cold

Your words flow through my veins,
like frost on a cold Winter's day.
How could you be so cold,
and let me throw it away?

I can feel you from the inside,
memories about to collide.
How could you be so cold,
and let me tear the wound so wide?

Poison me with your love so deadly,
a horrifying symphonic medley.
How could you be so cold,
to let the river flow redly?

How could you be so cold,
and let me lose control?
How could you be so cold,
and let the truth unfold.

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  • Deathwolf Tasagka
    August 12, 2008
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    Well its alittle of, on its flow, a couple mispelled words, but who gives a fuck about that hah, i dont surely. Good write lass, I enjoyed it, it was better from reading these fake blond wanna be emo groupies poetry. A good reliever. I enjoyed it as I said. Keep writing love.

    Sincerely,
    Deathwolf Tasagka