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Fly

I want to grow and leave my mind.

fly away,

leave this world behind.

be a world class Opera singer,

a Jazz trumpet player,

New York city dweller,

try all sorts of things,

I want to fly, before I die.
































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  • Sagerider gold member
    June 15

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    I like the idea

    If you are going to fly, I would suggest northwest about two thousand miles. Not New York, the place is full of Yankees.


  • parenchma
    June 5

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    Short hops first. (I know... wings and all)
    Stay away from high cliffs and tall trees till you get the hang of it. (me, intimidating?)

  • DrunkenRam
    January 24
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    Nice, like a played down Bucket List, I hope You get to do all those things and More.


  • arafura
    January 9
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    fly...

    the cage door is open... fly!


  • Peteskid gold member
    January 7

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    So very nice...being the things you want to be, that is my idea of flying too; besyt of luck in the contest...PK

  • Wilson Maxwell
    January 7
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    Good Luck In The Contest. You convey your thoughts with passion.


  • islekine
    January 6
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    Well penned!

    I want to fly before I die too!
    Write on and on!
    ThinkPEACE*


  • freewolf
    January 6
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    I absolutly love the last line.


  • he broke me
    January 6
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    this is sweet i like it good luck in the contest
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