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Grown Man Wears Lipstick and Kisses Children

Yeah...

McSue me:
Bring on corporate attorneys...
Tomorrow's McPoliticians...
Telling me that I made a clown cry

McStub my foot
With your big red shoes--
Here is McWisdom:
The true Tetragrammaton:
The Rhesus monkey, the Utahraptor, the mule, the squid...
Creatures Moses didn't find McWorthy to mention

Inspiration
Elation
Creation is a burp in mud

Knowing all
Know-it-all
No, is all, when He can erase mistakes with a Flood!

McKick my head in!
Drive needle-thin shards of nasal cartilage
Up my frontal lobe...
Make me feel guilty
As everyone else dotes on vapid entertainment

Yeah...

McSue me:
Bring on McLawyers
To tell me I'm McThrough.

What is the crazy?

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  • Burtan
    February 12, 2008

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    LOL. Nice..... and love the title. You have left me with a big red smile and unfortunately hungry for some McFilth or maybe even some Kentucky Fried shit in a bucket. Thanks.

  • wendymolly
    January 24, 2008
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    Great I dea for prose though, by the way! Great writing with thoughts!

  • wendymolly
    January 24, 2008

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    yeah, I heard kids really don't like clowns according to some bullshit obscure poll from the netherlands that cnn picked up a week or so ago, who gives a shit?


  • Fixing Tomorrow
    January 10, 2008

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    I loved reading this!! it's almost a dark humor, to me. I loved the 'McKick my head in!" line. This was great, and I thank you for sharing it with me. You make some good points.

  • Justin3
    January 9, 2008
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    This is a very original poem if anything.Nicely done!


  • Delicate Fire Water
    January 7, 2008

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    This is a good write, Bruvva! I hope to be able to see more of your work like this Talk to you soon!

    All the best, your Sistah!

    ~Stephi-Dawne~


  • Dawliah
    January 7, 2008

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    Wtf. Hating on Ronald much?
    I loved this, i did, lmfao, metaphors and anger;
    fucking McBrilliant.

    o.o;


  • Innisfree
    January 6, 2008

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    I will admit that I had to read this two times before I really grasped the theme...but once I did, I thoroughly enjoyed it and found it throught-provoking and passed it along to some friends for a noteworthy read. I didn't tell them the part about reading it twice, I didn't want to feel McFoolish.

    Charity


  • Alexis Manley
    January 6, 2008
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    Delicious

    Provocative Gio, very different take on mr ronald lol


  • iccara
    January 6, 2008
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    very interresting!

    a very unique write

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