McSue me:
Bring on corporate attorneys...
Tomorrow's McPoliticians...
Telling me that I made a clown cry
McStub my foot
With your big red shoes--
Here is McWisdom:
The true Tetragrammaton:
The Rhesus monkey, the Utahraptor, the mule, the squid...
Creatures Moses didn't find McWorthy to mention
Inspiration
Elation
Creation is a burp in mud
Knowing all
Know-it-all
No, is all, when He can erase mistakes with a Flood!
McKick my head in!
Drive needle-thin shards of nasal cartilage
Up my frontal lobe...
Make me feel guilty
As everyone else dotes on vapid entertainment
Yeah...
McSue me:
Bring on McLawyers
To tell me I'm McThrough.
What is the crazy?
Comments
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LOL. Nice..... and love the title. You have left me with a big red smile and unfortunately hungry for some McFilth or maybe even some Kentucky Fried shit in a bucket. Thanks.

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Great I dea for prose though, by the way! Great writing with thoughts!
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yeah, I heard kids really don't like clowns according to some bullshit obscure poll from the netherlands that cnn picked up a week or so ago, who gives a shit?


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I loved reading this!! it's almost a dark humor, to me. I loved the 'McKick my head in!" line. This was great, and I thank you for sharing it with me. You make some good points.


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This is a very original poem if anything.Nicely done!
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This is a good write, Bruvva! I hope to be able to see more of your work like this
Talk to you soon!
All the best, your Sistah!
~Stephi-Dawne~
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Wtf. Hating on Ronald much?
I loved this, i did, lmfao, metaphors and anger;
fucking McBrilliant.
o.o;

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I will admit that I had to read this two times before I really grasped the theme...but once I did, I thoroughly enjoyed it and found it throught-provoking and passed it along to some friends for a noteworthy read. I didn't tell them the part about reading it twice, I didn't want to feel McFoolish.
Charity
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Delicious
Provocative Gio, very different take on mr ronald lol

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very interresting!
a very unique write






