Hold close to the smiles we shared my love
The moments that seemed to led to infinate joy
We knew this time would someday come
The end is welcomed by me...
as I hope you understand
The pain was becoming unbearable
I wish for you to shed no tears
If you need to cry...
I will cry for you into eternity
I hope the anguish you feel will only last a moment
Think of of it as just another day before you met me
I know that will be hard...
Though it will show you that you can move on
Remember that the angels comfort me
Just as our dreams should still comfort you
I pray that just because I am gone
You dont lose touch with your heart...
it is what made me love you
It is what will carry me away peacefully
Across to the other side...
where you will live forever within my spirit
Take faith that you filled my life with such joy
Know that you made each day worth the suffering
That you taught me how to experience joy...
eventhough I never believed in such a thing
I am sorry for leaving you my love
Though it was my time...
it didn't give us enough
It robbed us of a life together
Just understand that peace fills my soul...
The pain no longer racks my body
So from that I leave you with one final dream
The dream that someday you will understand...
what you did for me
Author notes
Makes this even harder knowing that I cased myself to lose my love and in the end I will have no one to have 60 seconds to express how i feel about dying and why.
Because that day is coming soon from illness yet I wait desperately for the day that I no longer have to suffer and hurt
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- Death... Your final words after the fact by BluesMan.
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Amazing very heart felt This poem brought tears to my eyes i can feel the purity of your sincerity Brilliant Good luck in my contest
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Wow touching. This is powerful and heartfelt. I hope this is not true but if it is I would say to have faith and continue to live enjoyably with time you have left.This was amazing and I like your style.You write from the heart like me. I am fan of that. I think you reach more people if you. great job and continue to write.
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