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Nervousness





sad, left
as a dog without master  
poor, despised of job
walking in road of bitterness.

wandering to nobody's pity
painful dark soul,
without love grey. nervous
as waves stolen from sea of misfortune.

so deep tragedy in heart
illusion force dying, flutters
dreams of loneliness.

going nowhere, try hitchhiking,
may be someone rescue, provide shelter
to escape torment instincts.








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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 9, 2008

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    I love the metaphoric word use in this write. Passionate and clear imagery.

    Thank you very much for your entry
    Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda