Silky mane so soft and white.
Silver eyes so pure and bright.
Muscular build, fine and strong,
neighing like a siren's song.
Dancing, leaping through the meadow
like bolt of light across my window.
Fine hair like winter's first snow,
illuminating from moonlight's glow.
Bringing good luck to one and all.
Guided by mistress's call.
From glittering stars you were born
into an agile, magnificent unicorn.
A contest entry
- Weave Me Into Your Magick Spell by StormGoddess.
700 points, ended January 14, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love the unicorn, and this is just wonderful. Enchanting piece you've written.
Thank you for entering and good luck
Storm -
how touching sweet, though i never saw one, and you write thusly. well done and success in the contest. thanks for sharing.
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Yes, unicorns are such magical creatures, so beautiful. Had a soft little one for my granddaughter to sleep with when she was a baby. She loved it. Like the flow and rhythm and rhyme in these lines.
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Smiling and thinking how really pretty this poem is.
Love enchantment. 
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A unicorn! So beautiful... This poem is lovely and has magical lines that feel so happy. I really enjoyed reading it.
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