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Chaos

Waves of power rock to and fro.
Shaking emotions as the wind blows.

Depression crests at break of dawn.
Crashing against bright shores now gone.

Washing away delight of the past.
Abandoned in the darkness now cast.

(C) Nichole A.Dustin
  1/5/2008

Author notes

Picture prompt above, accredited to judge. Metaphorical piece, from the picture.

My mother taught me if you have nothing nice to say don't say it at all. We are not here as pros, we are here to share our art and have fun. *grin*

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  • bluezz
    February 13, 2008
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    I agree I can visualize the whole emotion and feeling you put in this ... great poem ..


  • LaylaLace
    February 9, 2008
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    I can really visualize and almost feel the violent and natural feels of this poem.


  • z etoile
    January 9, 2008
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    Beautiful!