I am
That quiet deep
Ever-churning
Teaming, burning
Awaiting Word
--deeper still--
calling face to sing.
Author notes
PROMPT: I AM . . . (Complete the thought)
In a list
A contest entry
- I am... by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended January 6, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congratulations on your trophy
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This is lovely and deeply compelling... x Thanks ever so much for sharing... Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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i love how your poem seems to pick up steam, almost like a waterfall, and then crashes near the end...and gently trickles along. SO cool!
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flawless
I am -calling face to sing-excellent choices from top to bottom, from the Title WATERS to the waters in-between your first and last lines. I read this with (I am) before each line, and I am impressed.
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makes me want to dive in head first and basque in the light of these beautiful words, bravo
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Stunning!
Gaylene
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