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SchizoFrantic

My name is Dave. Or is it James...
That is information I cannot disclose,
I cannot mention any names.

They are out to get me. The CIA.
Already I know too much.
It's me, they want to assassinate.

I have documents that will rile the nation
And this is something the Secret Service just will not allow.
Always, always I must run,
Escaping my pursuers.
My ensuing termination.
To God's Chosen, this document I must endow...


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He is an escapee of his own sick mind.
Surveillance is everywhere,
Watching him in real-time.
The documents he bear are imaginary,
But still, he has hit men on his tail.
He must protect the innocent,
In His mission he cannot fail.
A messenger of God to deliver world peace,
There can be no dilemma... he must succeed.

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  • flaed
    January 10, 2008

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    i really like this one.
    i like how you split it into 2 sections. and ..well i really like it. godd luck. you have agood shot to win.

  • ErroneousSage
    January 5, 2008

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    Amusing

    I don't know if this was meant to be amusing or not, but I found it pretty funny. Especially the way you started out.


  • warrior-eagle
    January 5, 2008

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    This reminded me of a movie I saw about John Nash (i think that was his name)...But anyways, this was a really great poem written about people with Schizophrenia, great job you did really. I like it, but sadly there are people that have this illness. Keep writing!

    ...Simply Me♥

    P.S God bless you