Stumbling down this, A touch on the shoulder,
tree strewn path. a hug here and there.
Looking for, With a smile,
nothing. You promised me it all.
A wisp of wind brings, You knew all that I did and,
a whisper. all that I regretted.
Louder, louder still, When I wasn't ready,
the voice grows. You said you would always be there.
Off the path now, Someone new came along,
a branch snaps. I became a memory.
Side-stepping in order to avoid, But to me you were my air,
a cliff's edge. you were my sustenance.
Running in circles, A glance from you and,
you trip. I was forced to turn away.
Falling onto a rock, A kiss from you and,
you went unconscious. My heart would freeze.
[A boy, met a girl. A dusting of cherished, memories?
Months on end they were, was all that was left to exist in my heart.
acquaintances. Without a second thought,
The wishes ran wild. you stole my dream.]
Author notes
read the left column and then the right column.
A contest entry
- you left this feeling here inside me by CarCrashHumor.
600 points, ended February 23, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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"A glance from you and,
I was forced to turn away."
I love that line!
and also "a touch on the shoulder"
because that's such a simple, friendly gesture
but it can mean the world.
the setup was creative
thanks for entering -
love it. I think it's absolutely amazing.
haha. I entered this contest, I didn't know you were in it -
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thank you love. haha, i was looking at the contests and i liked this one, i'm pretty sure i entered after you. i didn't realize that it was the same one you entered.
*With Always Love
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