Swing your hand this way.....
Shutter of heartbeats; pulse quickens
Rollercoaster of emotions; butterflied stomach
Lock your eyes this way.....
Flinch ever so slightly; the iris colours intertwine
A dance so beautiful; subtle in a place such as this
Kiss my lips this way.....
Gooey warmth; concentration
Slightly chapped; peppermint flavour
Caress my body this way.....
Fingertips; shivers down the root of the spine
Pain mixed with pleasure; anticipation
Make love to me this way.....
Gentle and caring; passionate wild
Rough animalistic; long and slow
A contest entry
- you left this feeling here inside me by CarCrashHumor.
600 points, ended February 23, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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wow i really like this peice. It makes me sad when I put your words to my ex's and I's relationship.
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a very intimate and loving piece
"Caress my body this way.....
Fingertips; shivers down the root of the spine
Pain mixed with pleasure; anticipation"
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