night fall will rise as the suns rays will fall, but darkness can't quiet a black hawks call.
Love and hate are no different, when pain is given the same way. Choosing either will send the Black Hawk astray.
Life and death are the same if after life there is no death. The Black Hawk doesn't fear death because in the future the past doesn't stay in the depths.
The Black Hawk's eyes are green like the earth, and it will die with the earth as well. But people leave the earth in flames burning higher than those in hell.
The Black Hawk will give us a warning that no one will bother to hear, but as the future approaches, it will change to a threat that the world will soon fear.
A contest entry
- BE A VOICE FOR THE VOICELESS. by flaed.
1000 points, ended January 22, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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i really love your metaphore you have used in this wonderful poem, i love the deep meaning you have hiding in there, i love the flow of this poem also, i wish you the best of luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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it is a good write. but not quite wat i was looking for. perhaps try again?
it was verry soul oriented. but not soap boxy. more about than through there eyes.
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