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Meant To Be

I stand here patient in my stall,
Waiting for your return.
Loving words I do recall,
Never painful, never stern.

Other mares are talking now,
Saying things I wont repeat.
I’m trying hard not to allow,
Them to bring me to defeat

I know you love me,
You told me so.
That how were meant to be!!!!!!!

Author notes

Written from an abonded horse's view to show the loyalty and trust these marvolous animals have

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  • Sandygram
    January 22, 2008
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    Wanted to leave you applauses and forgot!!!

  • Sandygram
    January 22, 2008

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    Congratulations on winning the Silver in the contest. A wonderful and heartfelt porm. Blessings to you. You take care, Sandy


  • flaed
    January 5, 2008
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    ouch. so sad. beautiful poem. no complaints. verry nice. thank you.