INDULGE
Answer to the cries,
INDULGE
Things that righteousness denies,
INDULGE
Gorge your spirit,
Slake your thirst,
Drink deep; feed long,
Until you burst.
First admit the hunger,
Then hearken to its call,
The mindless art of gluttony;
The angel cannot fall.
So revel in the virgin flesh
Smoke wafting through the silky mesh
And drink another, smoke another
Fuck another,
Mindless lover,
You are a god,
There is no other…
So just indulge.
Author notes
This is the first of two poems I wrote whilst going through my 'Manson Phase.' While I like the way it sounds when read (or sung) aloud... It lacks potency on paper. There actually is a rhyme scheme... if you can't grasp it, don't worry... it's not really meant to be read... it's meant to be heard. Strictly an auditory poem.
Written November 8th, 2003
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Congrats on an excellant poem (as far as rhythm and style are concerned). I was a little confused by the content though, was it meant to say that you are a god? untouchable?..It is a very well-written poem nonetheless...please explain the meaning behind it though. thanks
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Really good !
Proffesionally done and written Well.
I don't agree with the content.
But regardless, you really wrote this good!
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