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Somewhere between you && I--x

I ache to fill the spaces
between your fingers
To hollow out the mirror
and make a better form of
twisted sanity--me

To make my hair the right
length--the right type
For my eyes to catch yours
in summer twilight
Love lighting up stars
like fireflies glowing over
a lake

I long for your hand in mine
Certainty confronted between--
subtle fingers, dancing,
intertwining around one another
like ballerinas sure of their steps
Silence falling upon footfalls

&& as night gathers, in starlight
I want you to love me always
not just for one night
when words of love become the one
thing to lure--to make me succumb
Still I am captivated by your
smile, your kiss--like fire dancing
on my tongue
My lips, a blazen glory

Take me away, and lets get lost--
in the spaces between our fingers
beneath a fiery sky where
love doesnt end && faerytales
dance like ocean waves on a sandy
desperation

I ache to fill the spaces between
your fingers

To ache for you is to ache
for more time
More time to become infinite,
well-defined, reputable in your memory,
imprinted in your mind,
sewn into your soul

&& if tomorrow never comes
I could die along with you today
with words rumbling in our ears
Whispers--like shadows reflections
across the bedroom floor
As we become one, fill in destiny
and times promise

I look into your eyes,
where stars fall && demons crawl
somewhere between heartbreak
and sorrows end

[I.ache.to.fill.the.spaces.between.your.fingers.]

Author notes

You're exactly my brand of heroine :]

--

[She's nothing you'll ever know, succumbing to perfection, lost in translation]

Option 1--quotes

"I ache to fill the spaces between your fingers"

Option 2-Titles

"Somewhere between you && I"

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  • he broke me
    January 5, 2008

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    "To ache for you is to ache
    for more time
    More time to become infinite,
    well-defined, reputable in your memory,
    imprinted in your mind,
    sewn into your soul"
    i loved that stanza... i loved this... best of luck in the contest


  • over the rainbow--x
    January 5, 2008

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    Oh wows [=

    '&& if tomorrow never comes
    I could die along with you today
    with words rumbling in our ears
    Whispers--like shadows reflections
    across the bedroom floor
    As we become one, fill in destiny
    and times promise

    I look into your eyes,
    where stars fall && demons crawl
    somewhere between heartbreak
    and sorrows end

    [I.ache.to.fill.the.spaces.between.your.fingers.]'

    I love that bit &&

    '&& as night gathers, in starlight
    I want you to love me always
    not just for one night
    when words of love become the one
    thing to lure--to make me succumb
    Still I am captivated by your
    smile, your kiss--like fire dancing
    on my tongue
    My lips, a blazen glory'

    that bit &&

    okie, just realised I'm just short of having the whole poem in here so I'll stop.

    This was amazing [ =

    *Finalist*

    [=

    ♥




    • Atrophya
      January 5, 2008
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      haha I love you muffin bear:]
      im glad its good enough for your contest!

      ♥