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Who are you?

I hear this voice
Inside of my head
Should I rejoice?
Or should I be scared instead?

Who are you?
Why are you talking to me?
You stick in my head like glue.
Can you just leave me be?

Did I do something wrong?
Am I in trouble?
I used to feel strong.
But now I feel like I'm a double.

Then, the voice talks back!
It says "Don't be afraid"
I will not attack.
I will come to your aid.

I tell you what's wrong
With the way you act,
and where you belong.
Yes, this is a fact.

So go on and play
But do not ignore me.
Don't push me away.
Because I will not leave.

I am always with you,
To help you fix things,
and when you are feeling blue.
The truth is what I will bring.



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  • princess hope
    January 8, 2008

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    I liked the hope in this poem, The dialogue between you and your conscience was very well done. Thanks for entering and best of luck.