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Jester Without A Script

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Red ruby shreds of crinkled paper
Lay torn from a dying script
A mask of grief and a twisted heart
Incased in a stone wall crypt.


Casting glances upon the crowd
An audience garbed in black
As the jester aims to seek approval
On the return of his comeback.


Foolish pranks that once paid off
Now crack in the cold aftermath
The execution of self penned jokes
Refuse to provoke a laugh.


A weeping heart and forsaken soul
Upon a stage carved out of fear
As the curtain falls, rejection calls
For the end is drawing near.


Tears for the jester are quietly shed
The master of fools is ripped
It's late in the day of twilight years
For an old jester without a script.

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 24, 2008
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    A very well composed poem Very well done indeed


  • Malkolis
    March 30, 2008

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    This is dark, in such an heartfelt way. I am really liking this poem each time i read it it gets better and better. you my friend have penned a great, be proud.

    good luck in the contest


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    January 7, 2008

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    STUNNING!!!!

    I LOVE THIS!!!!!!
    I THOUGHT THAT THIS WAS BREATHTAKING! THE IMAGERY AND THE SADNESS IS OVERWHELMING. THE WHOLE WORLD IS A STAGE AND WE ARE THE JESTERS. BUT NOW THE JOKE IS OLD AND HAS GONE STALE. THE CURTAIN IS DRAWING AND THE STAGE IS FALLING APART. WONDERFUL WRITING, MORE PLEASE.

    ALL THE BEST
    WAYNE LEON
    X


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    January 6, 2008

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    Wow sis where did this come from? Fantastic write! I think we all have a bit of the jester in usBut there is always the sad part beneath.
    All the best with this.
    Gaylene


  • lilAj
    January 5, 2008
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    Great!

    my, you're in fine form miss perdue!!
    both beautiful and sad
    wonderful write
    ~aj~


  • Poetic Obscenity
    January 5, 2008

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    omg, that's amazing. It's left me speachless. I love it so much,i just, wow..

    GREAT JOB..Thank you for entering the contest and good luck.

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