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Motivation For Imagination (Haiku)

morning sun rises
bursting color melts my soul
my mind's the canvas-

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I know it's short...but I could sum it up nicely and to the point. Hope you like it. =D

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  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    February 17

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    Now this is the type of haiku that I dont do well. I think you have done a very good job with this one.

    Mike

  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    October 15, 2008
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    I like this haiku. It is done very well. It is a type of poetry that I tried, but gave up on. I am too literal in most of my work - or too long winded.

    Great job.

    Mike

    P.S. Congratulations on the upcoming baby. They are incredible.


  • Mirthryl
    January 8, 2008

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    I particularly enjoyed your "my mind's the canvas" So crucial, the colors and themes we paint in our minds, hold in our heads throughout the day!
    Congrats on the silver


  • anamchara
    January 7, 2008

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    What more can I say? You paint a lovely picture.

    Short and definately sweet.

    Thank you for sharing this work.
    Blessings!


  • CharlotteRose
    January 6, 2008
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    Ooo, yes, I like it very much! Great use of the adjective "bursting" in a haiku that's timeless and classic, but not too cliche. Good luck in the contest!

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