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Blood stops
Skin heals
Scars up
Time stops
I dream
And wake
This life
Wont break
Wont fall
Rise up
Take back
My life
Find truth
The fount
Drink up
Look in
Wide eyes
So clear
Like youth
Shine bright
I am
Will love
Felt loss
Heart ache
God damn
Wont break

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  • Mommas Fallen Angel
    June 23

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    Wow this was everywhere! Really great! I think I really like the last two lines the best though. Even though the whole poem was good.
    Megan

  • Feed Your Addiction
    May 23

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    whoa...

    totally effin' crazy
    me likey, especially the whole "2 words a line" ordeal.
    great write, keep it up


  • BlackDiamondWolf
    February 5

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    its fast, but it didnt lose any meaning and its understood at the end. like life every line depends on another, so even the form is a mesage i enjoyed it


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 10
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    I really like this! It had a fascinating pace about it. Very strong write!