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Prayer #1

You see me from the mountaintops
You see me when the city stops
You know me when im crying
You cradle me when im dieing

You comfort me in my fear
It is you whom i hold dear
In youre eyes and face
I see the end of the human race

And as the minutes tick by
Passing time until i die
The pain is mine,as is fair
But with you my woes, i do share

As i do my daily sin
As i make the devil grin
Keep me pure, the purest white
And guide me down the path of light

My prayer

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  • argyra-potameides
    March 30, 2008

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    Wonderfully Worded

    It has a great ring to it It chanted along well in my mind and left me with a good sense of closure