She loved him she swore as his photo laid under her draw
But he hurt her and left her broken and bruised
She was every guys favorite doll, with her you would not loose
Her short skirts and tanks had nothing on the other girls
She gave him everything anyone ever wanted
She gave it to him all for free
What a whore you say no just lost in thought and misery
Her pain was over flowing ; love was only lust
She had nothing more and nothing less to gain
For her life was a big messed up game!
She had no way to tell him ,so she placed her thoughts out on paper
Through the poetry she wrought, still it was never enough
What more could this girl do[?]
Her heart so numb she did not ever really care
[go ahead take the gun]
She whispered to herself, as she looked at his photo
Stained and torn this is what it came to this will be the end
She mailed all her poems to him love was to soon to begin..
For her life was about to be through for she hated the shame she lived through
She was a screwed up doll, a broken drug girl she siled with a kiss
And this love affair ended like this____
Author notes
Option 1 && 2
She's nothing you'll ever know, succumbing to perfection, lost in translation
♥
Screwed up && broken,
broken hearts && torn up letters
Nothing left to break
A contest entry
- [Sell me lie after lie, break my heart time after time, Tell me that you love me always] by over the rainbow--x.
525 points, ended January 19, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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thanks for the comment, and it's nice being able to relate or to know others can relate! much peace and love
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THanks back at you for the great comment!!
endless
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WOW!!!!!!!!
this poem is really good. i feel so sad for the girl in the poem. did he break her heart? or the other way around? you are an amazing poet, keep up the good work -
I like it, I don't think I've read anything like this one before, I like it...
Good job, and I saw the comment saying finalist below, so awesome =) Good luck in the contest!
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Finalist.
Is all I can say,
This was amazing [=
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