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Lo, How I Long

Lo,
How I long to Dance
neath the Moonlight,
to feel its tender
Caress;
Lo,
How I long to Run
Barefooted and Free
through the Pines.
Lo,
How I Wish
to Dance,
to Run,
To Embrace
my Love,
In the Silver
Moonbeam's light,
to Sing sweetly
to her,
Songs of Long-ago
Loves,
of Hunts
Wild and
Untamed.
I long for my
Love,
my Mate.

Author notes

To Love, a Wild and Untamed Thing. To Amber, my wild and untameable woman.

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  • vampire of thought
    April 17, 2008

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    wow, I think some of these lines could be combined to make a more full looking poem, but its so beautiful.

    great work.

    ~VoT


  • gullionmar
    February 8, 2008
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    well written

    very well written keep up the good writing


  • SexySerenity
    February 4, 2008
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    Awwww......

    baby,I love you so much.you're always there for me when I need you.I love you baby.831
    .**, ,**.
    *I Love *
    *.You*
    " "
    "
    AMBER
    &
    JAMES
    4EV