Silent anger fills my heart,
bad thoughts go through my mind.
darkness rises to the surface,
peace I want to find.
On my high horse looking down,
anger breaks my heart in two.
A feeling of pride comes about,
I'm not thinking much of you.
Words aren't said but hate is there,
I need a way to get it out.
Angrily I pace the floor
so badly wanting to shout.
As the anger steams inside my head
I begin to feel of sorrow,
nothing was said to bring anew
a bright and happy tomorrow.
A contest entry
- Silence by insearchofsweetness.
875 points, ended January 7, 2008, 17 entries
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It is like your subconscience speaking out loud. I like that angle. I like the feeling/honesty put into the poem. Thank you for entering my contest
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