Holding on
Ignoring time
Mindlessly
I should let go
Like he did
Or at least try
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Not like this, with
Overlapping meanings
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I
Constrict, releasing
And though it hurts
Never mind it
Tearing apart my...
Repeat
Endless rhymes.
My...heart
Every tear, a
Memory from long...so long..ago
But everything forgotten
Everything
Remember?
Brush the memories
Under a rug
To lie in darkness
Why speak in riddles?
Or lies riddled with poetry?
Never to be understood
Though the meaning is clear
Forget me please
Or at least pretend
Rejoice in return, then say:
Good-bye?
Endless rhymes,
Tearing apart my...
Author notes
Do I dare to dedicate? Appologies are like the rain. They fall. Then they dry up. Forgotten.
(For contest
[She's nothing you'll ever know, succumbing to perfection, lost in translation]
opt. 1 or possibly the last one...
In a list
A contest entry
- [Sell me lie after lie, break my heart time after time, Tell me that you love me always] by over the rainbow--x.
525 points, ended January 19, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
3000 points, ended August 26, 2008, 1668 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is ... riddled and very well penned lol great job!
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I really liked this,
'Why speak in riddles?
Or lies riddled with poetry?
Never to be understood
Though the meaning is clear'
I loved that stanza.
I found the beginning slow to read, but thought it perfectly reflected the mood of the poem with how it was set out.
good luck in my contest
♥



