You sit there acting so cool
I'm getting sick of your smack talk at school.
Stop trying to be something your not!
YOU ARE PERFECT THE WAY YOU ARE!
Stop trying to be preppy/punk.
It's not a good look for you.
I love you and all but please just stop.
It's pissing me off how you think your not good enough!
Stop thinking guys don't like you because trust me they do!
You don't have to have a boyfriend to be a person.
Stop all your fucking complaining.
It's pissing me off.
It's over and done with.
Just please, be your self.
We all love you just the way you are.
Author notes
my friend is trying to change so that guys will like her more and it's pissing me off. Burning the Book
A contest entry
- Rebel! by Cinder.
900 points, ended February 23, 2008, 26 entries
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bravo
Ah, a sad, but too often a true tale...folks oughta like you for who you ARE, not who you pretend to be. A hard lesson to learn... nicely done! bravo... bravo...
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i know how u feel this label thing going around is just plain stupid great thinking by the way good job
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wow. your friend needs to realize she might actually have the upperhand if she doesn't change. great job on this.
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thank you
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Nice poem, but I just wish it could have been longer
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yea i know it was kinda short and cut off
but i had to leave so i had to end it there
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nice poem. Strong expression of emotion. Goes through the subject of changing just 2 be liked. Though ppl these days r not happy the way they r. they should be happy. everyone has a unique personality.
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