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Im a better man

Sliding the barrel in his mouth
Fighting with everything i have
Keeping the finger off the trigger
Not understanding so lost
Why does this man wont to hurt me
Ages past hidden in mind
Watching him yell from a distance
Seatbelt around his neck
body hanging out the car
Hand pressing excelerator down
Authorities bright lights 
A pathetic act such weakness
My role model

Author notes

This is about watching my father try to take his life twice,fatherhood is a gift grab it with both hands never let go.

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  • Lady Australis silver member
    January 5, 2008
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    darling
    i hate theat you have been hurt so much
    i love you so
    these are making me cry