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Divine Justice

I regret to rejoice in thoughts of
Dante's divine justice,
the inner circles of perfect retribution.

I imagine lustful inhabitants of circle two

  the violent, the fraudulent and the traitors
  who occcupy the lowest depths of hell

      opportunists and outcasts
      on the fringes of the Inferno

        the gluttonous, avaricious and greedy

wanting them all to feel
a cosmic parity;
to suffer for the pain
they inflicted on the innocent.

Anthropomorphizing the Diety,
making Him the vengeful warrior
feeds my fantasies when I am wronged.

Ultimately, I bequeath Dante
to the fourteenth century,
his terza rima a wonder of literature,
but his vision can not comfort my troubled soul.




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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    February 8
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    Beautiful

    Beautiful use of the English Language with a profound message---Excellent--Simply Excellent!!


  • pania gold member
    January 20
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    Beautiful poem, well deserving the gold. Perfect final line.


  • nansie
    January 5
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    Brilliant

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