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'Til You Say When

It's weird,
To feel this way.
How do I explain?
How do I say?

Love is suposed to be,
Great and pure.
I can't get along,
Without you here.

All I know,
And ever will.
Is that your gone,
And I'm here still.

Why you left,
I'll never know.
All I wish,
Is you come home.

It's dark and cloudy,
I hate this storm.
I feel you close,
I'm finally warm.

Please don't,
Leave again.
I promise to love you,
'Til you say when

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