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The Anti-Me

You go against me
Try to destroy me
And hurt me
And you expect me to say I love you?
Fat fucking chance
Hypocrite, deal with it
I dare you to say otherwise
To say that you love me for
WHO I AM
And not just because I'm your blood
Stop pretending
Living in a world
Of self pity and denial
Full of "she once was' "
And "could have been's"
This is me
Look me in the eye and accept it
Or are you trying to brake the habit?
I don't care about your anti-individuality schemes
Your "who are you?"s
And "what have you done?"s
Keep it to youself
Because all I see when i look into your eyes
And you dare to tare right back
Is everything I hate

Author notes

option 6, under control of someone else

He's broken my heart, but he's such a perfect addiction. He left me feeling like it was always my fault. It never was. Never will be. I've woken to his tricks.

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  • over the rainbow--x
    January 5, 2008
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    I can really feel the anger here, it was so strong, full of so much emotion.

    Can I just ask you to amend your authors notes though?
    There was a quote to put in your notes && you've missed it. Thanks [=

    This was such a strong write, thank you so much for entering. Good luck in my contest