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Dead To Me- Twice

You scare me                                     

  ____Beyond perception or regard____-

With your poetic form
             
  ____I stab myself again____-

You hurt me                           

  ____With your hands____-

With your silent looks     
           
  ____Bullet’s shoot through my head____-

I stare at you blankly
 
  ____As I slouch against the wall____-

Wishing it where different

  ____... I bleed a puddle of blood____-

Wishing somehow I was alive

    ____I have this want to return____-

If only just to try to kill you one more time

      ____To avenge what you did to us____-

Because you left your home

      ____You shattered everything____-

In chaos and insanity

        ____We tried to live normally____- (But?)

Life just didn’t seem to want to continue

        ____We couldn’t, because you left____-

You weren’t there to hold her as she cried
               
____Never were you seen again sewn into the seams of our life____-

So she left this world in a terrible fright
         
        ____You didn’t even pretend to cry____-

I’m so ashamed you where ever called a father of mine

        ____You’re nothing but a low down lair____-

I’m glad I tried to kill you ‘father’

        ____But now as I die____- (I wish)

I just wish I had one more chance

        ____To slaughter you more defiantly____-       

To make my dream a reality

        ____So you’ll really be dead to me____-

Author notes

It is actually two poems....As one.....REALLY weird, but I'd thought I'd try it. You may read them together or seperatly. To help distinguish I put spaces and - on one poem. It is about a son of a divorced couple, and how the dad left them for another family....And how he was feeling, and how he and his sisters Mom killed herself.... etc....

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  • Walk-Free
    June 2, 2008

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    I am so impressed with this write.

    I sincerely love the depth & raw emotions of this poem through simple words.

    It has a truly depressing depiction of what a broken family would be going through...x

    loved the unique style of this poem


  • Silenced Tears
    January 8, 2008

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    I love this. So sad.... I can't believe it was so well written... okay I can because it's by you XD but it's so... wow...

  • Northern Downpour
    January 5, 2008

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    Wow, that was very strong. You have written this so well, even though it was particularly bitter and sad, it was still quite interesting.