I am...
Strange,
Wonderful,
Annoying,
Depressing,
Weird,
Confused,
Cynical,
Random,
Completely unfocused,
Unhinged,
Disassociate,
A loner yet still sociable,
Complex yet undeniably simple.
A walking contradiction.
I am human.
I am me in all my misunderstood glory.
I find the world is a far nicer place inside my head.
I'm the introverted extrovert.
I'd rather be hated than loved.
Love always leads to disillusionment.
Innocence is dead.
The world surrounds me
Yet doesn't want me.
I am free yet bound by someone elses rules.
I am a being that feels.
A being that bleeds.
I dream.
I hope.
I cry.
I laugh.
I understand.
Author notes
To those that know my myspace URL, this is the orginal cut of it that ended up there and then flew to another site and is now on here for some reason...
Please tell me what you think
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I can so relate with this poem! I absolutely love it!
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Me too
But I think I would rather be loved than hated. It depends. I once said I would rather be respected than loved and that's probably still true
I like this write.
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Good -Worth a 2nd read
Your last verse is a summary - 3 lines of the poem you wrote, 2 lines of where you're trying to go with it. You did a good job of expressing frustration without pulling me into your inner fight.
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no this is not you...tis me lol it sad when the world is even worse than the one inside our head...well in my case that's saying something wicked write, love it
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