For all the time’s you’ve held me
As my tears crashed down around us
For all those frightful fears
You’ve turned into dust
For all the time’s you’ve made me strong
When I couldn’t walk alone
For all the times you’ve made me smile
For reasons almost unknown
For all those play fights and cuddle nights
For all those silly things we do
For those roses you sent and the perfect days we’ve spent
I’m falling even deeper inlove with you.
For all the perfect promises
That you’ve made and then kept
For all the dreams you’ve told me
And all those beautiful texts
For all the giggles and wriggles
For all the memories
For all the romance and that one special dance
You mean the world to me
For everything we’ve done
For everywhere we’ve been
I just wanted you to know how much it’s worth
And how much it means to me!
A contest entry
- Enter All Your Love Writes Here! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended March 8, 2008, 306 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your Best Pre-Written Rhyme by piccola.
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Comments
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beautifully romantic. I didn't find that this fit well into my idea of rhyme exactly words like kept and texts are slant or forced rhymes and not really what I wanted. but thanks for entering
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This person really is special, they have done something beautiful for you and that's taken the pain away from life and anyone who can do that is worth keeping for sure.
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I'm glad you've had these treasured moments and they have been there to support you and make your bad times good, your tears smiles and your happiness valued. It's nice to have someone who cares so much!
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This is so sweet. I've been three years with my girlfriend so I utterly and completely relate to this very well. I loved the way you described certain things "beautiful texts", "play fights and cuddles". Nicely penned, my only critical comment would be in the first stanza forth verse, the timing (I felt) was off by one word.
Very well done!!
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A very touching poem you have penned. I can tell it came straight from your heart and holds all your inner feelings.
All the best,
~T.S~
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A beautiful and heartfelt tribute. Filled with those deepest emotions. Keep the pen handy, poet!!!
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The first verse was my favourite it seemed the deepest to me.The rest was good to though.
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i really like this poem, it's so emotional and heartfelt.
wow
=)
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I like this poem! it sound as if it really speaks from your heart and it all flows together so well.
My favourite is the second stanza and the way the last line rhymes so well, you just need to put a space between 'in' and 'love.'
Great Write!
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I like this. Lucky you to find someone that's worth this much to you. Good rhyme scheme flow too.
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this is great. Keep up the good work.
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