Star-struck,
no one has that affect on me,
like you
I believe your I love yous
I believe your forevers
and when other people try to warn me
I believe you.
Until the bitter winter night
you let me in on your plan,
your assurance that I'd find another,
just like you had found.
Belief yanked out from under me,
for your amusement
I'm left standing a fool.
Author notes
2. I don't get you . . .
I can't forget what you've forgotten
all along
I've never been so alone. . .
I was pretending
Your secret kiss of confidence
Was my escape
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"Belief yanked out from under me,"
one of the worst feelings ever.


