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When the Omega Comes

Somehow the moon lends itself to a sleeping earth,               
twilight succumbs as night's curtain deftly falls,
chirrups cease, winds relent, summer's flavour silent!

Nature will now pause; her tentative fingers sit in quiet repose,         
aroma steadily settles, veying with kelidescope effect for the alpha, 
night accepts the inevietable gracefully.

Naked eye is blind until reality beckons,
how nimble the darkness performs,
when the omega comes, will it prove its worth?


Author notes

The words that first came to mind are:

flavour
pause
fingers
aroma
kelidescope
blind
matter

I am unable to upload pictures because I have the free AP package. However, You will find the graphic I have chosen via this link: http://www.tfaoi.com/aa/5aa/5aa171.htm

Just scroll down when you access the page, the graphic is on the right-hand side.

I do hope you are able to find the graphic, if not, then I realise my entry will not be elegible. I have done my best due to the limitations of not being able to upload graphics in the free AP.

Thank you, Katie

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  • creationsfromheart
    January 6, 2008

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    This is avery good!

    I like this very much and I found the picture fine thank you for joinging in on this contest and good luck!


  • Sonja
    January 6, 2008

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    Of course that we could find the graphic, and your poem perfectly fits with it. Good luck dear friend.
    ~Sonja~


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 5, 2008

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    This is an really nice poem very different, I wish you the best of luck in the contest


  • heartnsoul
    January 5, 2008

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    Ah Katie, I for one don't need the graphic to have your words paint the picture in my minds eye. A soft gentle silence that seems to feel as if the moon itself has tucked you in for the night. Waiting for you to dream only the dreams that you can dream, patiently waiting to take you on that journey.
    I do know how frustrating it is not to be able to upload. But then, it does encourage and challenge us doesn't it? I've missed you...so nice to see you grace my pages once again. Good luck in the contest.
    ~Michelle~